Hi Karma, your sylvia Plath IOC was extremely good and understanding for a listener. You were able to hit all the top criteria according to the rubric especially with the excellent understanding of the text. You were able to continuously link different parts of the text to the different language techniques present, your sequential style of structure let the IOC to flow well for the listener. MY FAVORITE PART WAS YOUR CONFIDENCE, you seemed to be able to carry out the IOC without much needed breaks and your confidence of the text. The only thing I would suggest would be to manage the time limit because it crossed 10 min and maybe explicitly explain how the language techniques effects the reader.
Hi Karma, your sylvia Plath IOC was extremely good and understanding for a listener. You were able to hit all the top criteria according to the rubric especially with the excellent understanding of the text. You were able to continuously link different parts of the text to the different language techniques present, your sequential style of structure let the IOC to flow well for the listener. MY FAVORITE PART WAS YOUR CONFIDENCE, you seemed to be able to carry out the IOC without much needed breaks and your confidence of the text. The only thing I would suggest would be to manage the time limit because it crossed 10 min and maybe explicitly explain how the language techniques effects the reader.
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